"The transportation funding article looks great. Fabulous work! You took a
potentially dull subject and made a 2400-word feature article extremely
interesting. The earlier article in our Talking Business magazine on business
redevelopment was outstanding. I especially appreciated how you showed the
feelings of the affected business owners.
But you outdid yourself on this transportation article. The 6,000 readers of
our business magazine will gain insight and have some appropriate "call to
actions." We value your business insights, tenacity and willingness to take
on hard subjects."
